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The New Beginning- Prologue

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There was a grassy area covered with mist. Dew sparkled on the grass, making it shine. A beautiful white she-cat looked up at the dark blue sky, seeing the round moon, glowing brightly. The she-cat lashed her tail side to side, pacing around the clearing. She shook her head, sighed, and sat down. "Blazeheart wants revenge," the she-cat meowed.
"Of course he does, Angelfeather." Angelfeather turned her beautiful white head to another large white tom. He padded closer to her, with the moon glaring at his fur, making it shine with silver outlines.
"These are difficult times." The tom meowed. "We must help the new apprentices to prepare when their time comes."
Angelfeather let out a hiss of annoyance. "But how, Skystar? Ravenfeather's kits are still young- they were just made apprentices! We don't know what their powers are yet."
Skystar blinked and sighed. "We must send them an omen. Trouble is coming, and we have to warn them. It is the reason why they're born."
"But there must be a bigger reason than that! Every Clan fights a huge battle once in their lives," Angelfeather meowed, with her tail lashing with anger. She let out a growl, "I will not let Ravenfeather or my daughter live through ignorance!"
"We must not fight now, Angelfeather." Angelfeather turned her head to the speaker. "We aren't fighting, we need to figure out how we can deal with this, Leaftail." Leaftail shook her head. "The kits will eventually discover their powers. Yes, we will send them a sign, but after that, they'll have to live their lives." Her eyes gave Angelfeather an unreadable expression. "I care about Ravenfeather's kits, too, but all we can do is guide and warn them."
Angelfeather growled.
Leaftail continued, "Blazeheart has been visiting FeatherClan to find which kits he can take so he can have them betray FeatherClan. There are very little kits, but Flower is expecting some, and he might take on those." She gave Skystar a long stare.  
Skystar bowed his head respectfully. "We'll send a sign to Hopepaw and Cinderpaw,"
"What kind of sign?" Angelfeather asked.
Skystar narrowed his eyes thoughtfully. "It will be a sign that only those two will notice. No other cat will know, except us."
The two cats nodded, and Skystar got up, stared at the dark blue sky, lashed his tail, and the entire clearing turned white.
Yes, I started a new series. This is the prologue for 'The New Beginning'. Many warriors came, Flower decided to stay with the Clan, and Ravenfeather's promised kits finally became apprentices.

Lots of stuff happened during the seasons, and I will write what happened during those seasons on the first chapter of The New Beginning.

Someone said I should make a new series about what it will be like when Stripestar leads the Clan, so I did. Here's the first small part of your request.

I don't own warriors, but I own the characters and story.

Please tell me how I did on this one. I'm trying to improve on specific details, but I don't think I'm too good yet :/ I'm not sure if anyone can picture anything.
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Great story the detail's amazing, love the beginning. Characters are also cool, name are nice, how you describe the cats is also very good. The setting could be a little more described and the beginning could use a little more describing also, but other wise it perfect. I love how you start this intro by starting some suspense already, I can't wait for some more of this story. I can already see an amazing battle, a good story line. This story if you keep going it could turn out to be a very amazing story. Good luck in writing the rest of this story.